You’re really improving Anne! I would say your next step is to put some more weight into the bachi strikes, especially on ichi-no-ito so that the sound really remains there buzzing when you play on the other strings. Maybe it’s time for one of those practice sessions where you focus all of your mind on learning one specific thing. Read Kevin’s mental talk to get the motivation going.
PS. Please, no more sepia. It looks like Paranormal Activity or something. I was just waiting for the jump scare 