Tucked in button-ups? Sure. Tucked in t-shirts? Mmmm… Only if you’re James Dean.
Heheh, well, I figured better safe than sorry. Don’t worry guys. I’ll represent the male gender next time with UN-tucked shirt, mustard stain on the shirt… and unzipped fly for good measure!
I’m liking the smaller one too, especially if it’s the standard size.
If you put the text on the front, I think I’d like it better without it on the back. Or is that not efficient enough advertising?
Well, as Karl (or someone) said, smaller text is a bit harder/annoying to read, methinks. (especially if it says “international shamisen society”)
Hey, but it’s worth a try! I’ll whip up a shot soon.
Okay, here we go!
First off, the backside. I think it looks spiffy on it’s own, without text.
But then we come to the frontside.
In my opinion, that text is really, really small, and won’t be pleasant to read. In my opinion, this shirt needs the word “bachido” and “shamisen” in it, as the theme of the first shirt is about representing (or as we say, "Reppin’ "). As for following shirts, I have absolutely no problem with less words or whatnot.
Yeah, definitely like the backside plain with just the mon. Very sharp. The text on the front is small, yeah, you could take away the white subtext and just leave the red “Bachido”, which may not explicitly state the idea you want to convey, but if it’s clean and eye catching, it’s a conversation starter.
But again, if there’s someone like me on the street, shamisen enthusiast but not much of a conversation starter with strangers (unless they offer me candy, of course), how would shamisen connection be formed without mention of it on the shirt? :-S (Let’s not forget that it still looks like a steering wheel to the untrained eye )
Keep all the text on the backside. Having only the mon makes it look like “YA’LL, I LIKE CARS”. Put it higher up.
As for the front, maybe the half-mon and only Bachido will work? In other words we get International Shamisen Society on the back with the kanji, and therefore we can skip that on the front.
To get back to the other important matter at hand… Button shirts, yes you can put these in your pants with the right belt. T-shirt, no it looks like two forces working against each other. The t-shirt going for a comfortable and relaxed look while the tucked in part tries to look more sophisticated.
And I don’t even like cars. (well, driving that is)
Put it even higher up? I don’t think I’m able to do that.
Yeah. That would be good for the front, though I think small kanji would be tasteful as well. Small, greyed, enough to know that it’s Japanese. It could even be taken off from the back (English “I.S.S” in the back, and Japanese I.S.S in the front.)
Well, it’s good I learn this at some point. The last time I wore a tshirt was 6 years ago.
Now we need to contract that MyJob-dude and get some matching fashion pants/trousers.
Hahaha! I’m not sure that " Myjob" was a dude (???).
Don’t tell me you’re having prejudices that a dude can’t have such unimaginable knowledge and expertise in the field of precious leggings?
But yes, the thing was an automated bot. However, someone must have written his stuff and that person is in possession of some crazy knowledge.
I must say I like the small bachi, but think this is better:
http://i.imgur.com/bQRwE.jpg
haha <3 the heroic pose with the espresso cup
hahaha lolz maybe i should be the new bachido fashion bot?
Haha! Yeah! Myjob won’t even know what hit him (or her) or…?
Alright folks! Are we ready to have the next “final” cut made? It seems this is what we’ve settled on.
Awwwwww… MyJob… He may have been a little annoying, but what a sweet little bot thing. Whoever was pulling his/her/it’s strings had a passion for fashion.
hahaha lolz maybe i should be the new bachido fashion bot?
Well, that prestigious position is between you and Grant. His eye for fashion is like my palate for espresso.
Yes, it looks good!
After all these small changes you’ve made, is the bachido text on the front in the same red and gray hue as the back?
Alright folks! Are we ready to have the next “final” cut made? It seems this is what we’ve settled on.
Awwwwww… MyJob… He may have been a little annoying, but what a sweet little bot thing.
Whoever was pulling his/her/it’s strings had a passion for fashion.
hahaha lolz maybe i should be the new bachido fashion bot?
Well, that prestigious position is between you and Grant.
His eye for fashion is like my palate for espresso.
haha its on grant, i challenge you to a fashion dual >:O
lolz
Oh snap! Looks like there’s a place that allows sleeve printing!!!
I’ve yet to confirm the price yet, but it’s pretty cool to see the option is actually available.
Was there something we wanted on the sleeves? The mon is on the front/back, so the sleeves should probably be a little different, methinks.
(Also, sleeve art/text could be saved for another design,)
less is more , and yes you can save some design so people will have the choise between two or three different t-shirts !