The Bachido Mon

I’m still not sure what to say if someone were to ask “Why are there three?” But hey, it looks good with three, and uh…cuz we’re a community…?

Thats exactly why I like the symbolism of the base design of the three bachi being connected within the circle. I think it does a great job of showing what bachido is, a connection between shamisen players. and as more feedback is received from all the members the mon can only become a stronger symbol for our community.

No matter what the design is there is always going to be confusion when its seen by someone who has no connection or experience with shamisen. So I think that shouldn’t influence this decision. When we seen it we immediately see three bachi, but out in the world we should expect to have to explain it to people its to be expected.

Now since I believe I’m starting to ramble I just want to say as new ideas are introduced to this thread and the mon becomes a symbol of the bachido community. I am excited that when we come to a decision we will be able to wear this symbol to any gigs we have showing that we are members of our “Shamisen Guild”.

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One idea for getting rid of the wheel thing is to change the border. I think the 2 interleaved squares you posted are a bit too much.

What about having a dou as the border?

I made this example fast. You can also cheat and make the dou regular so it has the same length on all four sides.

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well the more I look at the first one the more I get over the “radioactive” first impression and I don’t mind a “badass” touch . . . did you consider just rotating it a bit though?

I actually like that and it would make it at least a rolling (steering) wheel or rather an image of our shamisen “movement” :slight_smile:

http://freecarvers.com/sem/mon.jpg

(sorry did not get familiar yet with the direct embed option so please click the link for the image)

i like the first simple version, and the Karl’s idea using dou as the border is great… my favorite so far

My first impresion was: holy c! this is radioactivity!

But I see it in the second time, and it has something… I don´t know but, I like it! The first design, has something… It´s like harmony in music… I cant explain it, but I see It was what it need to be. I see bachido here, in this mon. It is a proporcionate mon, it has good symetry. Sorry, my english is too bad to explain it, but really, It has something.

Who cares about first impressions? You need to see in deep to understand it, this happens a lots of times in our life… First impresion: radiactivity. Second impresion: its here. This is bachido. Really, I love this mon. And sorry, but I like it with its circular border.

Thanks Sid! I think it might get really good if more time is spent on it.

It’s okay for this time paco :wink: Only because I’m sitting here and eating a Manchego DO Valdehierro from Spain right now :slight_smile:

Yeah! you have good taste!! :slight_smile:
Manchego´s cheeses are awesome! if you like strong flavors, try cabrales… is like a demolition ball in your mouth, but its amazing! totemo oishi! :slight_smile:

Whoa snap! :open_mouth: Masahiro, in Samurai lineage??
Man, there’s so much I don’t know about that dude.

Well if I knew this before, I’d have him wear a full suit of traditional armor for the album cover!

By the way, I forgot to show this. It’s actually the finalized mon. Somehow I forgot about the kanji when I showed it to everyone.

Not sure it it helps with the steering wheel thing. :-S

Honestly I wasn’t that hot on it before as it seemed to be missing something. The kanji definitely makes it better IMHO.

Bachido written in kanji is a perfect addition.

Looks Great!

Hi all - sorry to be late to the party (both in answering this post and in answering something for Kevin - that comes next Kevin, I promise). OK, you wanted my answer, so better go get a cuppa and settle in… :wink:

Well, I confess that my very first thought when the mon came up on the screen was “hmm, that reminds me of a shuriken”. (That’s where a lady’s brain goes when she had an ex-boyfriend who was an early black belt ninja graduate of Hayes-sensei… {grin}) I do like the original design, and actually, the fact that it may be perceived as slightly “martial” is totally in keeping with our Fearless Leader Kyle, since it combines two things dear to his heart.

Moving right along to many of the suggestions and designs shown as alternates to the original one, I must agree with most or all of what several members, specifically Kevin, Gwyn, Eric, Norm, Karl, Liam and Jamie, have said about the design. Simple and clean is generally a more memorable logo than busy and cluttered. You already have a good design on your hands, and messing it up, or “prettifying” it does not make it any better.

I don’t see why we need to have flowers (or other "decoration) in the logo. I agree with Karl about the geometric imbalance of soft, round flower petals alongside the the “stronger” lines of the bachi. If there were a reason for such a juxtaposition, great, but in our case, there is none and it does look “off”. If your aim is to have someone recognize your logo as shamisen-specific, the more you clutter up your original design, the less likely that will happen. And the busier it is, the more likely that your clever little trick of having the itomaki in the centre (which is rather a nice “Japanese-style” touch of subtlety) will get even more lost. Normally when flora/fauna is used, it’s to represent something like a regional/national flower, etc. However, we are an international society. So there is no single country’s flower/tree/bird/emblem/whatever that would represent Bachido, and certainly not sakura. (Sakura is a somewhat overused emblem for many, many Japan-related societies and things Japanese, poor little flower.) We are trying to demonstrate that shamisen knows no boundaries, that it is for everyone everywhere. So I personally don’t think that putting Japanese flowers into the design does anything to bring that idea across. And as for Masahiro’s design of the intersecting squares with the sakura in the middle, with respect, while it is an attractive and clean design, it doesn’t in any way bring shamisen to mind, have an “international” feeling, etc… (Sorry, Masahiro-san!)

I had the simple mon next to Nitta san’s, and I couldn’t help but feel that it was thin and sparse. […]

I think you’re confusing “clean and contemporary” with “thin and sparse”… And anyway, what’s wrong with sparse - that’s kind of the epitome of Japanese art, if you think about it…

one idea could be to have a ring and then the bachi hand that we have at the top of the page inside. The black bachi would just be outlined with a thin white color.

When I read that and started thinking about what some people had offered as ideas up to the point I started writing this reply, what came to me was to have one single bachi, standing on its end, blade up, with three increasingly thick lines behind/through/over it. In a circle. With nothing else. Clean and simple. Then, as I was writing this reply, since it was taking so long, I thought I should reload the page. I saw that Jamie has essentially reproduced almost exactly what I was thinking of (for which I’m grateful, Jamie, 'cause I can’t draw/design worth a damn! {lol}), except he’s still using the 3-bachi steering wheel idea. If you take Jamie’s design, use only one vertical bachi, make the three lines have three different thicknesses as in a shamisen, and stick that single bachi and strings into a circular mon, you’d have something that was shamisen-specific, didn’t look like a steering wheel/weapon/nuclear waste symbol, etc., and would be clean, simple and sharp. It would also reproduce well in print, online, in silk screening, etched on product, etc.

No matter what the design is there is always going to be confusion when its seen by someone who has no connection or experience with shamisen. So I think that shouldn’t influence this decision.

I agree.

For the T-shirts, my opinion is that the mon was a little big on the front side.

I agree.

Black and white has so dark traditional image and looks stiff.

Would it perhaps look less “stiff”/better if the black and white were reversed? For a mon, I have to say that I personally prefer a black and white one to any colouration (including Kyle’s first gray “flower”). Maybe that’s because black and white is the most traditional for mon, or because black and white brings the design itself forward, rather than bringing colour forward, if you get my drift. As for when it’s on T-shirts and swag, that’s a different story, and in that case, one could play with colour in all sorts of ways to satisfy at a consumer level.

How about we propose divisions of bachido but all part of the main section o: ? we could have different mon’s but they all have the bachido mon somewhere on each piece

Normally, when you try to brand or market something (which is basically what Kyle is trying to do with Bachido, after all), you want brand/logo etc. recognition that will work across all platforms. Especially since Bachido is basically just starting up, as it were, having multiple logos or multiple variations of a base logo does not sound like the best way to get brand recognition. So I suggest we should stick with a single logo. Sorry, my advertising and marketing side is coming out pretty strongly in this post, what can I say… :smiley:

Anyway, just to recap, my vote is for simple and clean. So, of what’s been discussed and/or shown in this post so far: I do like your original design. I also like Jamie’s design of the three bachi with the strings (I find the strings help offset the “steering wheel” effect). And I think I might like my idea of the single bachi with strings, but I’d have to see it first to be sure (which ain’t gonna happen if it’s me who’s got to come up with the design! :-D). FWIW.

Let me come up with a different aspect with mon. I come to realize some things while reading Linda san’ s elaborate analysis on the mon designing.
I did not notice Jamie’s design with three strings is so attractive even in black and white until listening to Linda. Maybe because all the Japanese traditional mon looks different but means same to me Japanese because none of them are without western taste.But I have never seen one like three delicate lines and looks having somewhat western delicacy on the mon.
As Bachido is international, isn’t it necessary to add more western and African or anything else non Asian.
So far as I see, as I can see the picture, Jamie’s the best to me.
Still, Karl’s humorous design is very interesting and enjoyable.
Anyway, the basis looks like on Bachi Kyle had designed.
It amazing that Bachido members are all good designers!!!
Cheers us!!!

Hey Karl… I don’t think Masahiro is from the Sakai branch of the Nitta,otherwise his family name would be Sakai. The real Nitta Clan’s mon was never found , I think. there are no official documents to prove it. My family’s history is full of mystery,as like as the Nitta clan.

For me, the best mon was the Mitsubachi with Bachido In kanji, xD ( mitsu-bachi , just created this name )

The dou design was not a joke though :slight_smile:

Mitsubishi will bring the lawsuit!

It’s always cool with ancestral research. Maybe Masahiro knows more about this.

But isn’t it strange that Sakai uses the same mon as Masahiro does?

It may be a coincidence, it looks like Masahiro San likes cherry blossoms,if you look carefully the things around the Petals are bachi(?)

loads of comments overnight ^.^
awesome, i get what you guys mean about the designs i suggested ^.^
I would love a simple design but i also am the type to want to see things done very detailed aswell sadly haha
Mainly out of curiosity though.

for example someone shows me a guitar in blue, i would like to see it in red for comparison/ just out of sheer curiosity of what it would look like in another colour or design.

Simple and clean would be lovely, it seems to be most preferable between bachido members.

Very true linda multiple logos would get confusing, i was just thinking maybe a small brand should the wearer choose to want it to show Hey im from the UK and im apart of bachido, or I’m from america and i’m apart of bachido

mainly to show how far we come to meet with eachother, or maybe i’m thinking could be small badges or somthing…?

Just thinking it would be nice to see at a meet sometime :slight_smile:

http://i.imgur.com/HrI1j.jpg something my bf made for bachido ^.^

I like it with kanji

It can go a lot of ways.

A single bachi is fine and all, and I really like the idea with the three lines, etc. However we have to remember that this is a mon and not just a logo. In it’s essence we are recreating something that is inherently Japanese. If we want to talk about all the different kinds of logos we can make, then we open up a whole new Pandora’s box; where symmetry, asian styling, and all around Japanese aesthetic might not even be a main concern. I completely understand that we are an international group, however the symbol we are designing is specifically a Japanese crest originally meant to represent a clan/family/etc, and I see no fault in keeping that concept close to heart when we discuss these designs.

In my opinion, keeping it clean and simple is great. We do run the risk of looking like a steering wheel and a biohazard symbol.
I never even thought about the steering wheel. The biohazard look crossed my mind, but it’s sort of unavoidable to bear a resemblance to something in this day and age.
The easy solution to taking away from the bio/steering wheel interpretation would be throwing in the Kanji. I personally like the kanji a lot, and I think it has mass appeal artistically throughout the world. Shamisen is from Japan, and so are the Kanji. They are distinct and beautiful, yet have profound meaning behind them as well. What more could you ask for in your symbolism?
Obviously for kimono you would exclude the kanji, but for shirts, mugs, stickers, etc, I think it looks great.

I actually love the version with the sakura. However it completely resembles Nitta’s, and for the sake of avoiding redundancy, that’s enough of a reason to not go in that direction.

And yes to monochromatic. Black and white looks perfect. Obviously it should be adjusted and adapted to appeal to one’s particular flavor, but the official logo is charming with it’s simplicity in color.

Oh yes, and here’s my personal preference for the mon w/ kanji added. It has
Bachi - Do - Kai
meaning that we are the “House of Bachido”, or “Bachido Association” etc.
I didn’t mean to leave it grey/white/black, but this is just the one I had been working on when Kyle and I were talking about adding kanji. I think the balance is really nice and takes attention away from it looking like a steering wheel or biohazard.